Melody of my soul. Comments ? - wound care flow sheet
I know, I know there is a section of poems and stuff. It seems more and get honest advice from M & D, even though the people. Perhaps the people who are often in this forum a little less cruel?
In any case, please write a comment, good bad or indifferent.
Humming a song as it falls gradually
begins tonight, simply, calmly, peacefully.
Thus, if the noise of the rain for me to come to
a concert soon filled the night air.
Rain can be a little more than a brazen thing, a bad temper
Often'm not sure, so solemn, jovial, friendly, dance.
At the same time, sing lullabies, and the tears flow again,
Smilies are updated, the souls are still alive, hope is reborn
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The show tonight was a special feelin thoughtfullyg
such as touching the rain, longing, sadness, pain of separation.
Moderate distance, the wind comes in this dark time
Loans is low, slow, sad, tears, the echoes from the clouds.
Robust, as if the purification of the heart,
Now the rain was the tears in the Wailing Wind,
Lightening danced slowly, feel the atmosphere,
translated, lighting, gently curved on the stage today evenings.
Now the rain has not noticed, and the wind did not care
change swirling leaves soaked with tears, which fell to the ground.
Soak the soil, is the food of life, a new hope
Rain plays the melody of my soul Lonely Tonight
Wound Care Flow Sheet Melody Of My Soul. Comments ?
3 comments:
Fine words, an interesting topic.
Do not let others put their creative talents.
Keep it. To appreciate to know. In a way, your baby. Life is what happened. It is your record of what you are now. If you continue to write poems in the years to come be able to compare and see how far we have come, and emotional skills.
Too many long words BABE ... At least not for a song anyway! There must be more ingenious than that!
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